Neal - Pat is not being tough enough on you. The law is pretty clear. The Sec of State gets to decide the title. Period. The lawsuit challenging the change will be interesting but as far as I can tell, they don't have a leg to stand on. See Mn Statute 204D.15.
204D.15 PINK BALLOT; FORM; DISTRIBUTION; SAMPLE BALLOT.
Subdivision 1. Titles for constitutional amendments. The secretary of state shall provide
an appropriate title for each question printed on the pink ballot...